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1. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 15:17:41 EDT zak storer 🎡

   "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunting, whose sorrow echoed into the cliffs above." <-- My first attempt at creative writing. It's weak. I'm keeping a portfolio so that I can keep a log of my progress.

   1. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:28:29 EDT zak storer 🎡

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      "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunting, it's sorrow echoing into the cliffs above."

   2. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:31:53 EDT zak storer 🎡

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      "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunted, it's sorrow echoing into the cliffs above."

   3. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:32:03 EDT zak storer 🎡

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      "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoing into the cliffs above."

   4. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:38:29 EDT zak storer 🎡

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      "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoing into the cliffs above."

   5. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:40:30 EDT zak storer 🎡

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      "As she walked into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoed into the cliffs above."

      1. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 16:48:55 EDT zak storer 🎡

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         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist,
         mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoed into the cliffs above." <-- final version.

      2. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:07:14 EDT zak storer 🎡

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         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist,
         mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoed within the cliffs above." <-- final version.

      3. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:08:58 EDT zak storer 🎡

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         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist,
         mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoed inside the cliffs above." <-- final version.

         1. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:10:31 EDT zak storer 🎡

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            'echoed' is not a verb here. It means 'imprinted' kind of.

      4. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:22:15 EDT zak storer 🎡

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         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist,
         mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoing in the cliffs above." <-- final version.

      5. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:24:38 EDT zak storer 🎡

         in reply to

         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist,
         mourning, haunted, its sorrow echoing in the cliff above." <-- final version.

      6. zak storer 🎡 (zacts@mastodon.social)'s status on Saturday, 03-Nov-2018 17:35:36 EDT zak storer 🎡

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         "As she drifted into the moon in the ocean, her lyre glistened in the mist, mourning, haunted; its sorrow echoed from the cliff above. " <-- The last sentence of my short story, Sappho.