Here is another sentence: (original) Thelonious captivated his friend with his new composition. (more specific vocabulary) Thelonious mesmerized Bud with his freshly devised harmonic structure. (alternate word order) Mesmerizing Bud, Thelonious devised a fresh harmonic structure. (with nuanced alphabet) Mesmerizing Bud, Thelonious devised a fresh harmonik strukture.