@camoceltic 
I like your preface bits, it's nice to be able to read what specific perspective you're coming from. It's good when you know whether a reviewer is someone who oft plays that type of game, or wants to get into them, etc. Also I giggled at your dad from nintendo comment. 

As always your little headers are both informative and funny, I like them.

That said, I'd tone down the comedic bits a -tad- in the actual main reviewing text, little bits I'm like "okay Camo that bit before was amusing but I wanna know proper stuff now" (That's deeply subjective tho) 

Overall tho I liked it, was informative enough for me to believe I'd make my mind up based on that. (Well, I already had cos those types of games aren't my types of games. But if I hadn't, I think your review would have tipped one way or the other)