I'm hoping to get enough $$ to hire a professional editor to give it that extra kick it needs. Unfortunately I don't have that right now. I even have folks in mind that I'd love to edit the chapters about programmer mental health to help me better articulate and convey to struggling developers that they're still valuable.
I hope you'll check it out and leave feedback if you're so inclined. Again, right now you'll need a Framagit account to read it.