@hushabunny Very good first video! Your voice is clear, your are very articulate and your points are solid and well argued. Scrip/delivery 8/10. The top of your head is cut off! You need head room! Give your self about 1/4 to 1/2 of a head above your head in the future.
@automaticorange oh!! i never thought about the head thing! yeah the camera was way too close to my face, thank you for pointing that out (in a super constructive and friendly way too!) 💕
@hushabunny Your have very harsh shadows on your face and the wall behind you. you probably only have a single overhead room light, which is fine. If you have a west facing window, try shooting in the evening to get really nice golden hour light. If you have some money grab a kit like this. https://tinyurl.com/yaaljksr You could also use some daylight LED bulbs in clip on work lamp fixtures. Just be sure to get ones that are dim-able. Lighting and composition 7/10
@automaticorange also yeah, i was wondering how to fix those shadows. My windows are at a weird angle so I'm working on setting up more of my room to be, shall we say, filming-friendly. again, thank you so much for your kind advice 💜