Your editing is pretty decent. you have a flash frame at your first cut and your jump cuts are very disorienting. You also spend a bit too much time as a 'talking head' sprinkle in a couple clips of the movie to illustrate your points about the plot. I know that it's hard to avoid the copyright gestapo these days, but fuck 'em. Also, your music bed is a little too loud, it competes with your voice try turning it down by 2-3 DB 7/10