Notices by Becka Sutton (shutsumon@tootplanet.space), page 25

#FlightRising Hatchies!

@zatnosk I wnat to make sure people are only spoiled if they want to be

@zatnosk yeah, just to double protect fic spoilers

Here endeth my rambling about my SAO remix for now. #nanowrimo

I'd be interested in any thoughts people have (especially about the rot13'd bit

still rot13
Ab bar xabjf guvf ng svefg rira bapr gurl rfpncr, ohg riraghnyyl Xvevgb qvfpbiref gur gehr ivyyvna jvgu uvf pbhfva'f uryc.

Remix spoiler ROT13 for extra protection

Xnlnon Nxvuvxb vf npghnyyl orvat senzrq ol gur erny phycevg, ohg gurl qba'g vavgvnyyl ernyvfr gung ur vf genccrq va gur tnzr nf jryy. Ur trgf genccrq gurer nsgre ur gevrf gb unpx va naq erfphr gur cynlref rneyl ba (vafcverq ol jung unccraf gb gur ivyyvna naq uvf grnz va FNB Vasvavgl Zbzrag/Ubyybj Sentzrag) naq vafgrnq fgnegf hfvat uvf nqzva cbjref gb uryc.

Which leads me to think that if I get that far in the remix that whole arc gets an even bigger remixing than the Aincrad arc will

and the remix for Aincrad ain't small. It's handling the reveal for the biggest change...

... of "let's show how evil he is by giving OTT melodramic expression and having him molest Asuna"

WHYYYYY..... it is so cliche. It's why Fairy Dance is the worst arc in SAO (well that and the whole Leafa and Kirito not realising who the other is even though they live in the same house in the real world which made me cringe)

I mean really two years and no one figured out a way to get everyone out of Sword Art Online? *eyes the government suspiciously* Why do I not believe anyone was actually trying...

Then there's the villian of the Fairy Dance arc. He's an evil dude who is doing human experimentation to perfect mind control but they fell into the trap...

So if I am doing this Sword Art Online remix fix idea for #nanowrimo I need to decide on some things because the muse is throwing so much stuff at me and I don't know how much will stick.

The muse wants to bring ideas from later in the series and use them earlier in order to fix some things that always bothered me ...

@LilFluff @dmoonfire Nanoha and Worm?
...
that could get strange quickly

Well it looks like I'm going with option number 3 https://nanowrimo.org/participants/shutsumon/novels/soul-lights-a-sword-art-online-remix-fanfiction #nanowrimo

@LilFluff @aldersprig I guess it's option 3

@InspectorCaracal @Wsteria pretty much I guess

@InspectorCaracal @Wsteria Merge the three! An AI Spaceship that's a sleeper ship and among it's other duties runs a MMO for the sleeping passengers making it a Dungeon Core?